Question

【題目】請你根據(jù)所給背景材料、建議以及要求寫一篇英文短文。

背景材料

編者按：本期刊出Henry的來信，歡迎讀者就信中談到的問題提出建議并給出理由。

Dear editor,

The summer holidays come to an end and a new school year begins. Although school is all about getting knowledge and learning is a part of our life, it's not only exciting but also exhausting, boring and stressful. I am worried about the coming duties.

建議1.心態(tài)樂觀 2.課后活動3.健康飲食。

要求l、詞數(shù)100左右

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫

3.開頭語和結(jié)尾語已為你寫好

Dear Henry,

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Yours ,

Mike

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Henry,

I'm glad to share my solutions to your problem. First, be optimistic. An optimistic way of thinking always helps us even in the most difficult life situations and this one is no exception. There's nothing in school that can make you scared. Cheer yourself up, and you'll feel no stress for good. Then, stretch yourself after class. Exercise not only builds up our body, but also helps improve our mood, which helps you forget about stress and makes you smile instead. Finally, eat healthily. In this way, you can keep energetic and fit. As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away. "Therefore, make sure you add enough fruit, vegetables, nuts, and other healthy foods to your meals.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Mike

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文寫作。需要注意以下要點。

（1） 仔細審題。明確寫作要求，抓住寫作要點。

（2） 擬寫草稿。在審題的基礎(chǔ)上，擬寫草稿，注意對關(guān)鍵要點覆蓋全面的同時還要注意內(nèi)容的豐富。

（3） 運用高級詞匯和句子格式。在寫作過程中要運用一些高級詞匯，還要注意運用一些從句，使得句子不再單一。

【范文亮點】

there be句型的應(yīng)用。There's nothing in school that can make you scared.

特殊句型：祈使句+連詞+sb.will do。Cheer yourself up, and you'll feel no stress for good.

定語從句。Exercise not only builds up our body, but also helps improve our mood, which helps you forget about stress and makes you smile instead.

定語從句。As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

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