假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

Dear Smith,

???? I have a good news for you. All senior three students will take part in a mountain- climbing activity in May 18th, which is intending to help reduce our pressure from study. So I’m written to invite you to go along.

???? We plan to gather at the school gate at 8:20, weather permitting. Then they will set off at 8:30, heading for the mountains nearby on feet. After having a good time, we are supposed to go back school for lunch at about 12.

???? The suggestions are as following. You’d better wear strong and comfortably shoes so that you can enjoy the trip. A bottle of water and some snacks are also necessary in climbing. In addition, you can take with you a camera to get some photos take.

???? Looking forward to your reply.

?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,

?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Li Yan.

 

【答案】

1.第一句去掉a

2.in May18th改成on May 18th

3.intending改成intended

4.written 改成writing

5.第五句they或we

6.feet改成foot

7.go back school改成go back to school

8.following改成followed

9.comfortably改成comfortable

10.take改成taken

【解析】

1.news是不可數(shù)名詞前面不用冠詞a。???

2.具體到某一天介詞用on。

3.短語be intended to do 打算干某事

4.“寫信”用主動語態(tài)表達(dá)，所以用writing。

5.全文主語是we。

6.“步行”用“on foot”表示，不用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

7.“回到學(xué)校”是“go back to school”。

8.“建議如下”表達(dá)為“The suggestions are as follows”。

9.修飾名詞shoes用形容詞comfortable。

10.get sth done“使某事被做”所以take用過去分詞taken。

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