Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

進(jìn)入高三以來(lái)，各個(gè)高考科目每周都增加了課時(shí)，有些同學(xué)覺(jué)得還是多些時(shí)間讓我們自己復(fù)習(xí)比較好。請(qǐng)就此寫一篇短文，發(fā)表自己的看法并說(shuō)明理由。詞數(shù)：120左右。

注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)任何相關(guān)學(xué)校信息。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version 1:

I believe it a wise decision for the school to arrange for us to have some extra classes now. As over the years, we have been so used to following the teachers closely. Our teachers also have had much experience in preparing us for the examinations. They know what is important for us and what may not be so relevant. As long as we listen attentively in class, finish our homework in time, we can surely do well in the various examinations. If we have more extra time, some of us may be at a loss, not knowing what to accomplish every day. As a result, their academic result will surely suffer. So I think it right and necessary for the school to add more classes concerning the exam-related subjects.

Possible version 2:

In my view, we should be allowed more time of our own. It might be true that adding some extra classes will be of some help to a few passive students. However, we cannot expect to always rely on someone else to decide for us what is necessary for our success. Besides, where we are weak can also vary from person to person. What our teachers do in class can rarely meet the needs of individual students. Thus, if we can have more free time, we can focus on where we are weak and balance our energy on different subjects. Anyway, if we can talk to our teachers and make an appropriate plan for our study, it will be wise.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求考生就高三各科增加課時(shí)發(fā)表自己的看法。寫作時(shí)，要選擇支持的一方或者反對(duì)的一方來(lái)寫，最好不要持中立的態(tài)度。在論述自己的觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，要注意條理性。要盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以及優(yōu)秀句式，為文章增色。在寫作時(shí)盡量使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，插入語(yǔ)以使文章層次分明，使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯亮點(diǎn)來(lái)提高文章的檔次，如定語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句和狀語(yǔ)從句等。