Question

11．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤．對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫(huà)一個(gè)勾"√"；如有錯(cuò)誤 （每行只有一處錯(cuò)），則按下列情況改正：
    該行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線 （\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
    該行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào) （^），在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
    該行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞．
     注意：原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改．
    Chinese students celebrate their birthday in different ways，66．birthday改為birthdays
but  the most common way is to hold a birthday party，at that                    67．that改為which
friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．On the    68．√
birthday，one usual receives nice gifts and good wishes from                     69．usual改為usually
others．Sometimes parents will prepare with a special dinner or                   70．with去掉
a cake to showing their love for their children．Since birthday                     7l．showing改為show
celebration is one of the important activities in one's life，they can             72．they改為it
be doing in meaningful ways．For example，we can buy a                            73．doing改為done
bunch of flowers or cook delicious meal for our mothers on that day.74．加a
Thus，we express our  thanks to our parents in return to their love.75．to改為for．

Answer 1

分析 中國(guó)的學(xué)生慶祝生日的方式各異，當(dāng)最常見(jiàn)的是舉辦生日聚會(huì)．聚會(huì)上朋友們一起開(kāi)懷暢飲，唱歌跳舞．還可以收到別人的禮物和祝福．有時(shí)，父母會(huì)準(zhǔn)備豐盛的晚餐或蛋糕來(lái)表達(dá)對(duì)孩子的愛(ài)．因?yàn)樯�日是一個(gè)人生活當(dāng)中重要的活動(dòng)之一，可以用更有意義的方式來(lái)慶祝．例如，可以買(mǎi)束花或給父母做一頓飯來(lái)表達(dá)我們對(duì)他們愛(ài)的回報(bào)．

解答 Chinese students celebrate their birthday in different ways，
                                               birthdays
but  the most common way is to hold a birthday party，at that   
                                                                                    which
friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．On the   

birthday，one usual receives nice gifts and good wishes from   
                     usually 
others．Sometimes parents will prepare with a special dinner or 
                                                          去掉
a cake to showing their love for their children．Since birthday 
              show
celebration is one of the important activities in one's life，they can 
                                                                                      it
be doing in meaningful ways．For example，we can buy a  
     done
bunch of flowers or cook∧delicious meal for our mothers on that day．
                                    加a
Thus，we express our  thanks to our parents in return to their love．
                                                                              for
1．birthday改為birthdays．句意表達(dá)的是復(fù)數(shù)．
2．that改為which．該句是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾名詞party，介詞后不能用that；at which相當(dāng)于where．
3．正確．
4．usual改為usually．修飾動(dòng)詞要用副詞．
5．with去掉．prepare是及物動(dòng)詞，不需要加介詞．
6．showing改為show．句中to show是目的狀語(yǔ)，要用動(dòng)詞不定式．
7．they改為it．邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤，句意指代的是birthday celebration．
8．doing改為done．句意表達(dá)的是被動(dòng)．
9．加a．a(chǎn) delicious meal一頓可口的飯．
10．to改為for．句意表達(dá)的是目的，return to是歸還的意思．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．