Question

【題目】在班級活動中，當你的想法與大多數同學不一致時，你是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人，還是尊重大多數同學的意見？請你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題，用英文寫一篇100～120個詞“短文。要求如下：

1.從以上兩種做法中選擇一種；

2.以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。

注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學校、同學姓名等真實信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認定。

When I Have a Different Opinion

Answer 1

【答案】When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it . By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day . Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

An alternative student version:

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism; I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達陳述觀點及理由。

寫作時注意以下幾點：

1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確從以上兩種做法中選擇一種，是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人還是遵從大多數同學的意見。

2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。

3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態(tài)。但是在以具體事例闡述的時候使用過去時

4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如not only …but also…不僅而且。

運用連詞while 表對比觀點。運用because 表達原因。

運用了表語從句表達原因The main reason for my choice is that …。

運用了賓語從句 decide whether do have a … ；discuss where to go for an outing

運用了介詞短語 By doing so, Without hesitation.

運用了強調句 we did have a lots of fun that day.

此外，文章還使用了大量習語和短語，如be worth doing sth; stick to sth.; have a good time; have lots of fun , tend to do 等。