Question

17．第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)
假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Michael正在一家孔子學(xué)院學(xué)習(xí)漢語和中國文化，知道中國人很重視家風(fēng)傳承．他在給你的電子郵件中想了解你家的家風(fēng)以及家風(fēng)對你的影響．請你給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件．開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：家風(fēng)family spirits
Dear Michael，
I'm glad to know that you are learning Chinese language and culture．Dear Michael，
I'm glad to know that you are learning Chiness language and culture．In your email you said that you wanted to know something about my family spirits．（高分句型一）Well，there are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family．My pareents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty，bravery，perseverance and diligence and they have set good examples for me and my brother．
My family spirits have a profound influence on me．（高分句型二）I'm always friendly to others and am always ready to help others．（高分句型三）I always cheer up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties．Owing great thanks to those good qualities，I have made great achievements in my study and life．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Well，there are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family．
該句使用了一個定語從句，即 that have been passed…修飾先行詞good qualities，在定語從句中使用了現(xiàn)在完成的被動語態(tài)．
（高分句型二）I'm always friendly to others and am always ready to help others．
句子使用了兩個并列短語be friendly to 和be ready to 表達(dá)家風(fēng)對我的影響．
（高分句型三）I always cheer up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties．
這個句子使用了even though這個鏈接短語，意思是即使，盡管，使句子上下文語境鏈接順暢．
固定短語：pass from generation to generation 從一代傳到另一代；
lay emphasis on 強(qiáng)調(diào)；have a profound influence on 對…有深遠(yuǎn)的影響；

解答 One possible version
Dear Michael，
   I'm glad to know that you are learning Chiness language and culture．In your email you said that you wanted to know something about my family spirits．（高分句型一）Well，there are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family．My pareents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty，bravery，perseverance and diligence and they have set good examples for me and my brother．
   My family spirits have a profound influence on me．（高分句型二）I'm always friendly to others and  always ready to help others．（高分句型三）I always cheer up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties．Owing  to those good qualities，I have made great achievements in my study and life．
                                                                Yours，
                                                                Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．