Question

【題目】作為一名高三學(xué)生的你，明年即將畢業(yè)�，F(xiàn)在校報征稿，請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀銓Ω呷�生活的體會和建議。

1. 對老師與家長的關(guān)愛表示感謝；

2. 向與自己發(fā)生過矛盾的同學(xué)表達歉意；

3. 努力學(xué)習(xí)，實現(xiàn)人生夢想；

4. 對學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹的建議。

注意：

1. 可適當(dāng)加入細節(jié)，使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)：100 左右（開頭已給出，不計入總字數(shù)）。

High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate. ___________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "No pains, no gains."

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱作文。提綱作文在寫作時需要注意以下幾個方面：首先需要審題。即：審要求、審文體、審人稱、審時態(tài)。其次，考生要能夠抓中心，列要點，列出寫作提綱。 寫作文時，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點。然后在體裁明確、中心突出、要點清晰的前提下，考生應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型，將要點逐條表達出來。最后根據(jù)要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連句成篇。在寫完全文后，還需要 通讀全文，檢查內(nèi)容是否符合要求，要點是否齊全，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否合乎要求。本篇文章需要注意前三個要點必須齊全，最后一個可以自由發(fā)揮。

【亮點說明】本篇文章要點齊全，而且使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)牧信e性詞匯，比如Firstly、Secondly、Above all等，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加清晰。除此之外，文章還使用了虛擬語氣，如Without their help and advice, my life would be different。以及定語從句如it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood。文章還引用了諺語增加了文章的感染力，如No pains, no gains以及time and tide wait for no men。