Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下便條。便條中共有10處錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（ ^ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除；把多余的詞用斜線（ \ ）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Mary,

Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves travelling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.

Yours,

Christine

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】had→has

【2】that→which

【3】have后加been

【4】Besides/Moreover/Furthermore/Additionally

【5】car→cars或car前加a

【6】or→and

【7】the去掉

【8】delighted→delight

【9】easy→easier

【10】keep后加in

【解析】

【1】根據(jù)句中in the past 5 years是與現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)連用的時(shí)間狀語，故had→has。

【2】that前有逗號(hào)，說明是非限制性定語從句，代表主句所表述的這件事只能用which引導(dǎo)。

【3】該句的主語many overpasses是set up的動(dòng)作承受者，故have后加been。

【4】根據(jù)前后句的關(guān)系修改，它們之間是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，故改為Besides/Moreover/Furthermore/Additionally。

【5】單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不可單獨(dú)使用，故car改為cars或者car前加不定冠詞a。

【6】rich和colourful是并列關(guān)系，故or→and。

【7】on holiday在度假，固定短語，故去掉the。

【8】to one’s delight令某人高興的是，to為介詞，one’s為形容詞性物主代詞，故應(yīng)用delight的名詞形式。

【9】此處與下文的有了email的聯(lián)系方式相比較，應(yīng)改為easier。

【10】keep in touch with保持聯(lián)系，為固定短語，故keep后加in。