Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪減：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Six months ago, Xie Lei boards a plane for London. It was the first time she left her country. She wanted to finish a business qualification in an university. Now she is in her preparation year, what she thinks is of great beneficial. She sometimes feels like a child, for she has to learn of almost everything when it comes to use English. Xie Lei lives with a host family who give her lots of advices, which makes her feel a great comfort. Her tutor used to encourage him to contradict the authors she read. Now, she is very independent and a more autonomous learner and fitting in good.

Answer 1

【答案】1.第一句：boards 改為boarded

2.第二句： left前加had

3.第三句: an改為a

4.第四句: what 改為which

5.beneficial改為benefit

6.第五句: learn of 中的of 去掉

7.use改為using

8.第六句: advices改為advice

9.第七句： him改為her

10.第八句: good改為well

【解析】1． 根據(jù)Six months ago, 可知是發(fā)生在過去的事情，所以用一般過去時。

2. This/That/Itis/was＋the＋序數(shù)詞＋名詞＋從句(從句中的時態(tài)要用完成時態(tài)；如前為is，則用現(xiàn)在完成時，如為was則用過去完成時)。

3. university的首字母發(fā)言是輔音，所以an改為a。

4. 這里含有一個非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系詞在從句中作賓語，指物，所以用which。

5 . be of great benefit是固定用法，意思是是非常有益的。

6. learn是及物動詞，后面直接接賓語。

7. when it comes to doing sth.是慣用法.意思是“當(dāng)提到--的時候。

8. advice是不可數(shù)名詞，所以advices改為advice。

9. 句意：她的導(dǎo)師鼓勵她反駁她讀過的作者的觀點。所以him改為her。

10. 用副詞修飾動詞短語。