Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

生活中充滿了選擇，學(xué)會(huì)自主選擇有助于我們的成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)以“An important choice I have made”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇120詞的短文，記述一次對(duì)你影響深遠(yuǎn)的選擇。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1.記述選擇的經(jīng)過(guò)；

2.結(jié)合此次經(jīng)歷，簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明自主選擇的重要性。

注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

An important choice I have made

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Answer 1

【答案】

As a saying goes, a burden of one's choice is not felt.

However, it was not until last year when I was asked to decide on arts or science that I understood what it meant. The choice was really tough, so I asked my parents and friends for advice. Unsurprisingly, most of them tried to talk me into choosing science for a promising future career, but history and English were what interested me most. Therefore, having analysed my strengths and weaknesses, I elected to take up arts. For the first time ever, I followed my heart, and I have been enjoying everything all along ever since.

Life is full of choices, and to live is to choose. I’ve got to realize that if you don’t make a choice, the choice makes you. And I am proud I can be responsible for my own future by making my own choices.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的主題是An important choice I have made，記述一件印象深的選擇，本文貼近自己的生活，比較有話說(shuō)。對(duì)于此類(lèi)文章，要注意一下幾點(diǎn)：1、首先，要根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際生活經(jīng)歷來(lái)記述一件印象深的選擇；2、其次，描述事件的原因、過(guò)程、結(jié)果時(shí)，可以多用一些連接詞來(lái)時(shí)文章順暢；3、最后，要注意點(diǎn)出文章的主題，文章的主題要與所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容有關(guān)；4、注意單詞、詞組、句式的運(yùn)用來(lái)給文章增色。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】在對(duì)于諸如此類(lèi)文章的寫(xiě)作，要善于使用不同的句型。英語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換。文章按照時(shí)間順序來(lái)寫(xiě)，使用了However，Unsurprisingly，Therefore，F(xiàn)or the first time ever這樣的詞來(lái)連接文章。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)也要注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來(lái)自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，本文運(yùn)用了talk me into，followed my heart，make a choice，be responsible for等短語(yǔ)。本文也有很多句型值得學(xué)習(xí)，如As a saying goes, a burden of one's choice is not felt.愛(ài)挑的擔(dān)子不嫌重，英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)，it was not until last year when I was asked to decide on arts or science that I understood what it meant.從句，having analysed my strengths and weaknesses, I elected to take up arts.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。