Question

假如你是Amy，請你給你的網(wǎng)友Joan發(fā)一封電子郵件告訴她你在老師的幫助下學(xué)習(xí)英語的一些變化和取得的進(jìn)步。

1. 過去：認(rèn)為學(xué)英語就是背語法規(guī)則和英語單詞；不喜歡讀英語，更不愿意和同學(xué)練習(xí)對話。

2. 現(xiàn)在：意識到英語是說出來的，開始喜歡講英語并和同學(xué)用英語交流；經(jīng)常上網(wǎng)閱讀一些新的英語文章并查閱一些英語資料，對英語越學(xué)越感興趣并且取得了很大的進(jìn)步。

注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右； 2、開頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Joan,

I’m glad to send you an e-mail to tell you that I’m getting more and more interested in English.

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Yours sincerely,

Amy

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Joan,

I’m glad to send you an e-mail to tell you that I’m getting more and more interested in English.

However, in the past I thought learning English meant learning grammar rules and words by heart. I didn’t like to do any reading in English, nor was I willing to practise speaking English with my classmates.

Now with my English teacher’s help, I came to realize we learn to speak English by speaking as we learn to sing by singing. I began to enjoy speaking English and communicate with my classmates. I often read some fresh English news or articles and look up some information on the internet. As a result, I have made great progress in English.

Yours sincerely,

Amy

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，要點有學(xué)習(xí)英語的變化和進(jìn)步1.過去；2. 現(xiàn)在。短文應(yīng)該用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時對比過去個現(xiàn)在。用第一人稱。還應(yīng)該盡量多使用較高級的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子之間的連貫性。

【亮點說明】 文中用了一些高級的短語和句式。如：learning English meant learning…分詞做主語和賓語；nor was I willing to practise speaking English否定詞位于句首，句子倒裝， came to realize，和As a result, I have made great progress in English等都很不錯。

考點：提綱作文。