【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I as well as my parents are going to New York City this month. I had been looking forward to visit there for a long time. It is one of the most beautiful cities all over the world. There are many places of interests where you can learn it in school. I’d also like to see the Empire State Building. Unfortunate, the Twin Towers were destroyed in September 11,2001, and I would have the chance to see them by himself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience.

【答案】

【1】are改為am

【2】had 改為have

【3】visit 改為visiting

【4】interests 改為interest

【5】it 刪掉

【6】unfortunate改為unfortunately

【7】and改為or

【8】in 改為on

【9】himself 改為myself

【10】excited改為exciting

【解析】

【1】are--am as well as意為“和”，其后動(dòng)詞通常根據(jù)as well as前面的主語(yǔ)確定，主語(yǔ)I是第一人稱，所以be動(dòng)詞用am，故把a(bǔ)re改成am。

考點(diǎn)定位：考查主謂一致

【2】had--have 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本篇文章是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，所以動(dòng)詞用have，不能用had，故把had改成have。

考點(diǎn)定位：考查時(shí)態(tài)

【3】long前面加a 考查冠詞。a long time意為“很長(zhǎng)一段時(shí)間”，故在long前面加a。

考點(diǎn)定位：考查冠詞

【4】city--cities one of意為“…中的一個(gè)”，其后可數(shù)名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把city改成cities。

考點(diǎn)定位：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)

【5】interests--interest 考查名詞固定搭配。places of interest意為“名勝古跡”，是固定搭配，故把interests改成interest。

考點(diǎn)定位：考查固定搭配

【6】去掉it 句意：在一些名勝古跡你可以學(xué)到你在學(xué)校里學(xué)不到的東西。故把it去掉。

考點(diǎn)定位：考查代詞

【7】in--on 考查時(shí)間介詞的用法。在具體某一天要用時(shí)間介詞on，故把in改成on。

考點(diǎn)定位：考查介詞

【8】and--or 考查連詞。句意：不幸地，這塔在2011年9月11號(hào)被摧毀了，否則我還是有機(jī)會(huì)親眼目睹的。故把a(bǔ)nd改成or。

考點(diǎn)定位：考查連詞

【9】himself--myself 考查反身代詞。myself意為“我自己”，故把himself改成myself。

考點(diǎn)定位：考查代詞

【10】excited--exciting 考查形容詞。excited意為“興奮的”，通常形容人，而exciting意為“令人興奮的”，形容無(wú)，故把excited改成exciting。

考點(diǎn)定位：考查形容詞

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