Question

 假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

As the high school student,I like to talk with foreigners to practise my

oral English and learn more about other culture. There were two foreign

teachers in our school in this term. They often go to the English corner so that

they can have a chance to practise the language. I seize every chance talk with

them. However,I sometime find they are not so interested in which I say.

And it’s hard to me to choose a suitable topic. I would like some advices about

how to communicate proper with foreigners and what topics to pick.

Answer 1

  As the high school student,I like to talk with foreigners 

      a

to practise my oral English and learn more about other culture. 

There were two foreign teachers in our school \in\ this 

      are

term. They often go to the English corner so that they can

       we

have a chance to practise the language. I seize every chance  +to talk with them. However,I sometime find they are not  

          sometimes

so interested in which I say. And it’s hard to me to choose a

                  what                             for

suitable topic. I would like some advices about how 

                                   advice

to communicate proper with foreigners and what topics to pick.

               properly