Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李華，你校即將舉行一年一度的“校園書市 (a campus book fair)”活動，其目的是給同學(xué)們提供一個交換、利用圖書的機(jī)會。請你用英語寫信給你的加拿大筆友Mike, 介紹此次活動的有關(guān)情況。內(nèi)容應(yīng)括：

1. 活動目的；

2. 活動內(nèi)容：買書，賣書，交換圖書;

3. 活動意義。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mike,

How are you doing these days?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Dear Mike,

How are you doing these days?

Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books, the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school. The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school, who are to sell, purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers.

As a regular visitor, I’ve found myself increasingly drawn by the fair. For one thing, the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics, motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons. For another, most books are sold at a lower price than what the bookstores offer.

Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to host such a book fair better.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱作文，考生首先要看清楚要求，然后再根據(jù)要求詳細(xì)討論。本文的話題是給網(wǎng)友寫一封信，為他介紹你校的一次活動，屬于書信類作文，所以使用一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)。在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語aim at以……為目標(biāo)；make use of利用；motivate sb. to do sth.激勵某人做某事；broaden our horizons開拓視野；for one thing, for another一方面，另一方面。還有非謂語Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books, the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school. 以及由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school, who are to sell, purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers。