【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧), 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(__), 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

On a Sunday morning, I got on a bus and found a seat near the back, and then I noticed a man seating in the front. He was pretended that a tiger toys was real and giving it a voice. He must be mentally disabled.

Behind him were other people to who he was trying to talk, but after some minutes he walked away and sat near me, looking annoyed.

I didn’t want to be laughed for talking to him but I didn’t feel like leaving him on his own either.

After a while I rise from my seat and walked to the front of the bus. I sat next to the man but introduced myself. We had an amazingly conversation. He got off the bus before me and I felt very much happy the rest of the way home.

【答案】

【1】第一行seating改為seated

【2】第二行pretended改為pretending

【3】第二行 toys 改為toy

【4】第三行who改成whom

【5】第三行he改成they

【6】第五行l(wèi)aughed后加at

【7】第六行rise改為rose

【8】第六行but改為and

【9】第七行amazingly改為amazing

【10】第七行刪掉much

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，講述了我冒著被別人嘲笑的危險(xiǎn)，和一位精神有問題的人進(jìn)行了一次有趣的對(duì)話，這讓我們都很開心。

【1】第一行seating改為seated 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。本句中seat的過去分詞已經(jīng)轉(zhuǎn)換成形容詞“seated就座的”對(duì)a man的情況進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說明。

【2】 第二行pretended改為pretending 考查語態(tài)。本句中動(dòng)詞pretend與主語he構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以使用現(xiàn)在分詞構(gòu)成過去進(jìn)行時(shí)。他假裝把一個(gè)玩具老虎看成真的老虎。

【3】第二行 toys 改為toy 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。前面有不定冠詞a修飾，說明應(yīng)該使用單數(shù)名詞tiger。

【4】第三行who改成whom 考查定語從句。本題定語從句的先行詞是other people，關(guān)系代詞whom作為介詞to的賓語，顯得較為正式，通常關(guān)系代詞who在句中做主語，不做賓語。

【5】第三行he改成they 考查代詞。本句中代詞they指代前半句中的other people。句意：過了幾分鐘，那些人走開了并坐在我的身邊。

【6】第五行l(wèi)aughed后加at 考查動(dòng)詞搭配。短語laugh at嘲笑；用在被動(dòng)語態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)換的時(shí)候，at是不能省略的。句意：我不想因?yàn)楹退f話而被嘲笑。

【7】第六行rise改為rose 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文第一句提及On a Sunday morning，這是一個(gè)一般過去時(shí)的時(shí)間狀語，敘述過去發(fā)生的事情，全文都使用一般過去時(shí)。使用本句使用過去式rose。

【8】第六行but改為and 考查連詞。句意：我坐在那個(gè)人的旁邊，并做了自我介紹。本句謂語部分是由兩個(gè)并列的動(dòng)詞短語構(gòu)成，所以使用并列連詞and連接。

【9】第七行amazingly改為amazing 考查形容詞。在英語中形容詞通常做定語或表語修飾名詞；副詞通常做狀語修飾形容詞、副詞或動(dòng)詞。本句中使用形容詞amazing修飾名詞conversation。

【10】第七行刪掉much 考查副詞。副詞much通常修飾比較級(jí)形式，而本句中happy是原級(jí)。very much通常單獨(dú)做狀語。句意：他在我之前就下車了，在回家路上我感覺非常開心。

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