Question

【題目】請閱讀下面短文,并按照要求用英語寫一篇 150 詞左右的文章。

When we get some money as a gift, how to deal with the money becomes a problem we must face. From my perspective, the answers are diverse in different periods. However, no matter how you deal with the money, the most important thing is to use it wisely.

In my childhood, when the cartoons about the car race extremely attracted me, I would use the money I received to buy toy cars. But when I entered the school, toys could not attract me. In this period, the things I wanted most were some electronic products. I always hurried to buy the up-to-date mobile phone immediately I received money as a gift.

Now I have got a job, the things above me not important for me. I do not need some useless things or something I have already had. Probably, saving money in the bank is my best choice.

In conclusion, if I receive a sum of money, in different periods I may have different choices. Whatever I choose to do with the gift of money, it must make me feel happy.

[寫作內容] 1. 用約 30 個單詞概括上文的主要內容; 2. 用約 120 個單詞就“收到零用錢為禮物”發(fā)表你的觀點，內容包括: (1)你怎么看待以錢作為禮物； (2)收到錢時，你怎么處理它； (3)你認為青少年用錢時需要注意什么。

[寫作要求]

1. 可使用親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文的句子;

2. 闡述觀點或提供論據時，不能直接引用原文語句;

3. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱；

4. 不必寫標題。

[評分標準]

內容完整,語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。

Answer 1

【答案】

The way the author deals with money as a gift changes over time. In the past he would use it to buy toy cars or mobile phones but now he chooses to save it in the bank.

Money is always the last thing I would consider as a present. Instead, I prefer to send such gifts as a purse or a pen so that the receivers can use them every day, which is a good way to recall the sincere friendship between us.

When I receive money as a gift, I will put it away, for I intend to travel to France next summer. Besides, Ive decided to donate a small portion of the money to poor children so that they can have a chance to study like me.

It is important for teenagers to develop the ability to handle money. First, as teenagers, we should have a plan rather than use money without control. What’s more, we can use the money to help others, because as the saying goes, to give is better than to receive.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類作文，請你用約 30 個單詞概括上文的主要內容;用約 120 個單詞就“收到零用錢為禮物”發(fā)表你的觀點，內容包括:(1)你怎么看待以錢作為禮物；(2)收到錢時，你怎么處理它；(3)你認為青少年用錢時需要注意什么。 寫作時要注意審題是否清楚是一篇書面表達成功與否的關鍵所在，在整個寫作過程中起著決定性作用。審好題會讓我們做到“磨刀不誤砍柴工”。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇合格的書面表達。首先第一段是30詞的概括，后文是你的觀點。用了較多加分的句子，例如： I’ve decided to donate a small portion of the money to poor children so that they can have a chance to study like me是一個so that引導的目的狀語從句，再如： First, What’s more讓文章條理更加清晰。