Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

My father is middle school teacher. He is a middle-aged man, so he works like a young man, full of energies. Every evening he is busy correcting his students’ exercises, prepare his lessons and doing some reading. Sometime when I wake up at midnight, I find him still busy on his work. Father puts all his heart and soul into his work. He cares for his students very much. If only his students have any difficulty, he will try his best to help us. When Father is in hospital last year, all his students went to see him. I was deep moved. Such is my father, and I love him very much.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】is后加a

【2】so→but

【3】energies→energy

【4】prepare→preparing

【5】sometime→sometimes

【6】on→with

【7】去掉only

【8】us→them

【9】is→was

【10】deep→deeply

【解析】

【1】is后加a 考查冠詞。句意：我的父親是一位中學(xué)老師。第一次提到用a。

【2】so→but 考查連詞。句意：他是個中年男士，但工作起來像個年輕人。根據(jù)句意可知表示轉(zhuǎn)折。故把so改為but。

【3】energies→energy 考查名詞。句意：他是個中年男士，但工作起來像個年輕人，精力充沛。energy表“精力”是不可數(shù)名詞。

【4】prepare→preparing 考查動詞的用法。prepare與correcting和doing是并列的詞，故要改為動名詞形式。

【5】sometime→sometimes 考查副詞。句意：有時當(dāng)我半夜醒來，發(fā)現(xiàn)他還忙于工作。sometime某時；sometimes表示有時。

【6】on→with 考查介詞。be busy with sth忙于做某事。

【7】去掉only 考查連詞。句意：如果他的學(xué)生有任何的困難，他會盡力幫他們。If表示“如果”；If only表示“只要”。

【8】us→them 考查代詞。幫助學(xué)生，學(xué)生不只一個，故用them。

【9】is→was 考查動詞的時態(tài)。根據(jù)時間狀語last year可知，用一般過去時，故用was。

【10】deep→deeply 考查副詞。deep表示具體的深而deeply表示抽象的深，我被深深地打動了。