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12．校刊"英語園地"為配合學校創(chuàng)建"綠色學校"的工作，開展了"創(chuàng)建綠色學校英語征文活動"，請根據下列提示用英文寫一篇征文稿，內容要求如下：
1．浪費水、電
2．亂扔可回收的飲料瓶、舊書本等
3．…
個人看法和建議
1．對學生進行環(huán)保教育
2．從關燈、回收廢物等小事做起
3．…
注意：1．詞數：80～120詞左右．
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．文章的第一段已給出，但不計入總詞數．
The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school．However，there are still a lot of problems in the school．Very often you come across an empty classroom with the lights still on．It's not difficult to find evidence of wasting water，a very serious problem．（高分句型一）Additionally，students do not recycle enough，throwing away the soft drink bottles，used exercise papers and books．Worse still，many students still use the non-environmental friendly lunch boxes，causing the"white pollution"．（高分句型二）
These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness．It's important to educate students to be more environmentally friendly．At the same time，students can do small things，such as collecting used items for recycling，turning off the lights，saving water．Always remember that it's everyone's responsibility to protect the environment．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息�？�"英語園地"為配合學校創(chuàng)建"綠色學校"的工作，開展了"創(chuàng)建綠色學校英語征文活動"，請根據下列提示用英文寫一篇征文稿，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：浪費水、電；亂扔可回收的飲料瓶、舊書本等；個人看法和建議   對學生進行環(huán)保教育；從關燈、回收廢物等小事做起
  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：However然而；come across 遇到；Additionally另外；throw away扔掉；Worse still更糟的是；At the same time同時；turn off 關閉；
It's not difficult to find evidence of wasting water，a very serious problem．（高分句型一）
Worse still，many students still use the non-environmental friendly lunch boxes，causing the"white pollution"．（高分句型二）
Always remember that it's everyone's responsibility to protect the environment．（高分句型三）

解答 The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school．However，there are still a lot of problem in the school．
       Very often you come across an empty classroom with the lights still on．It's not difficult to find evidence of wasting water，a very serious problem．（高分句型一）Additionally，students do not recycle enough，throwing away the soft drink bottles，used exercise papers and books．Worse still，many students still use the non-environmental friendly lunch boxes，causing the"white pollution"．（高分句型二）
       These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness．It's important to educate students to be more environmentally friendly．At the same time，students can do small things，such as collecting used items for recycling，turning off the lights，saving water．Always remember that it's everyone's responsibility to protect the environment．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．