【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在此處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在下面寫出增加的詞；

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉；

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

One day a lady saw a mouse running across his kitchen floor. She was very afraid of mice, so she ran out of the house, getting on a bus and went to a nearby shop. Here she bought a mousetrap and was advised to put any cheese in it. The lady went home with her mousetrap, and could not find any cheese. She had no choice but cut a picture of some cheese out of a magazine and put it in the trap. Surprising, the picture of the cheese is quite “successful”! When the lady came down to the kitchen in the next morning, she found a picture of a mouse in the trap besides the picture of the cheese!

【答案】

【1】his →her

【2】getting →got

【3】Here →There

【4】any →some

【5】and →but

【6】cut前加to

【7】Surprising →Surprisingly

【8】is →was

【9】去掉in

【10】besides →beside

【解析】

試題分析：一位女士發(fā)現(xiàn)家里有老鼠就買了捕鼠器，店主建議她在捕鼠器上放一些奶酪。但她找不到奶酪，就放了一張奶酪圖片，第二天發(fā)現(xiàn)奶酪圖片旁邊多了一張老鼠圖片。

【1】his →her.考查代詞。句中主語是a lady是女性，指“她的廚房”物主代詞要用her，故his改為her。

【2】getting →got.考查時(shí)態(tài)。此處是并列句，與ran和went一致用過去式，故getting →got。

【3】Here →There.考查副詞。指在商店那里她買了捕鼠器，根據(jù)句意和情境，故Here 改為There。

【4】any →some.考查形容詞。any表示“一些，任何”，用于否定句和疑問句；some表示“一些”用于肯定句。此處是肯定句，故any改為some。

【5】and →but.考查連詞。此處指她拿著捕鼠器回家了但找不到奶酪，前后句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故and改為but。

【6】cut前加to.考查動詞形式。have no choice but to do sth.表示“沒有選擇只能做某事”，but后用不定式，故cut前加to。

【7】Surprising →Surprisingly.考查副詞。此處單獨(dú)使用作狀語，修飾后面整個句子，要用副詞，故Surprising改為Surprisingly。

【8】is →was.考查動詞時(shí)態(tài)。全文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事，故用過去時(shí)，故is改為was。

【9】去掉in.考查介詞。表示時(shí)間的next短語前面不加冠詞，故去掉in。

【10】besides →beside.考查介詞。besides表示“此外”，beside表示“在……旁邊”；此處表示在奶酪圖片的旁邊，故besides改為beside。

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