Question

假設(shè)你是李華。最近你班舉行了一次班會(huì)，班會(huì)的主題是：是否有必要進(jìn)行太空探險(xiǎn)。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下表內(nèi)容，給校報(bào)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇文章，客觀地介紹討論的情況并表達(dá)你自己的觀點(diǎn)。

一些同學(xué)贊同	一些同學(xué)反對(duì)	你自己的觀點(diǎn)
●更好地了解太空	●耗資巨大	●？
●從太空獲得新資源	●宇航員的安全問(wèn)題
●擴(kuò)大人類的生存空間

注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100字左右
2. 標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示詞：宇航員：astronauts 生存空間: living space
Outer Space Exploration, YES or NO?
The other day at a class meeting we had an argument over

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Outer Space Exploration, YES or NO?

The other day at a class meeting we had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space exploration.

Some of us held it important to research outer space because, first of all, people can get a better understanding of outer space through their exploration. Second, new resources can be found there for human use. Third, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for human life.

However, others thought very differently. They said this kind of exploration is much too costly. Besides, it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.

In my opinion, people should be pioneering(先驅(qū)的；開(kāi)創(chuàng)的)and therefore such exploration of outer space is worth trying out.

【解析】

試題分析：

本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是是否有必要進(jìn)行太空探險(xiǎn)，題目給出了大部分要點(diǎn)，也要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是介紹贊同的觀點(diǎn)，然后是反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)，最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些好的詞組和句子：get a better understanding of 更好的理解，bring about 帶來(lái)，is worth trying out值得嘗試。The other day at a class meeting we had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space exploration.這句話使用了賓語(yǔ)從句， Some of us held it important to research outer space這句話使用了it做形式賓語(yǔ)， it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.這句話使用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，還有范文還使用了first of all, Second, Third, Besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。

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