Question

12．近年，青少午肥胖現(xiàn)象日益增多并引起各種健康問(wèn)題．你們的英語(yǔ)校報(bào)向全校征稿，討論如何能夠做到健康飲食，提高青少年身體素質(zhì)．請(qǐng)你寫一篇稿件，談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．分析青少年肥胖的原因，如喜歡吃快餐；
2．就如何保持健康給出建議，如健康飲食、適當(dāng)鍛煉等．
注意：
1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)70詞左右．（開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Nowadays，a growing number of teenagers are suffering from overweight，which has caused many health problems for them．Personally，eating too much fast food may account for teenage obesity．And lack of exercise may be another reason．As we all know it is very important to keep healthy．But do you know how to keep healthy？In my opinion，the best way to keep healthy is to have a balanced diet with more fruit and vegetables．Meanwhile，we should say goodbye to junk food and snacks．What's more，doing exercise regularly is also a good choice．Instead of spending too much time lying on our sofas or in beds，we should try to do more sports，such as swimming，skating，running and playing basketball．
In a word，having a good diet and exercising will surely benefit our health!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于青少午肥胖現(xiàn)象的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一提出話題：青少午肥胖現(xiàn)象日益增多并引起各種健康問(wèn)題；二分析青少年肥胖的原因；三如何保持健康的建議；四總結(jié)保持健康的建議．
高分句型：
1．Personally，eating too much fast food may account for teenage obesity．句子里動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)eating too much fast food 做主語(yǔ)；account for 是固定短語(yǔ)，表示"導(dǎo)致"．
依我看來(lái)，吃太多的快餐可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致青少午的肥胖．
2．Instead of spending too much time lying on our sofas or in beds，we should try to do more sports，such as swimming，skating，running and playing basketball．句子里Instead of 表示"代替，而不是"；spend time （in）doing表示"花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事"；such as 表示"例如"．
不是在沙發(fā)或者床上消磨時(shí)間，我們應(yīng)該多做運(yùn)動(dòng)，例如游泳，滑雪，跑步和打籃球．

解答 Nowadays，a growing number of teenagers are suffering from overweight，which has caused many health problems for them．（提出話題：青少午肥胖現(xiàn)象日益增多并引起各種健康問(wèn)題）Personally，eating too much fast food may account for teenage obesity．【高分句型一】And lack of exercise may be another reason．（分析青少年肥胖的原因）As we all know it is very important to keep healthy．But do you know how to keep healthy？In my opinion，the best way to keep healthy is to have a balanced diet with more fruit and vegetables．Meanwhile，we should say goodbye to junk food and snacks．What's more，doing exercise regularly is also a good choice．Instead of spending too much time lying on our sofas or in beds，we should try to do more sports，such as swimming，skating，running and playing basketball．【高分句型二】（如何保持健康的建議）
In a word，having a good diet and exercising will surely benefit our health!（總結(jié)保持健康的建議）

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