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【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你的好友Peter前不久隨父母去了英國(guó)，他寫(xiě)信告訴你他很不適應(yīng)國(guó)外的校園生活，感到很孤獨(dú)并希望你給出建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他回封電子郵件。

1. 多交一些朋友；

2. 積極參加各種活動(dòng)。

注意:

1.詞數(shù):100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯:adapt to適應(yīng)。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear peter,

I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in England, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

First, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文, 要求寫(xiě)一封郵件，建議信。

第一步：

審題: 郵件 建議信

人稱：第一、二人稱

時(shí)態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)

2、結(jié)構(gòu)： 總分法，分三部分，第一部分寫(xiě)信目的——提建議，第二部分說(shuō)明具體的建議內(nèi)容，第三部分希望建議對(duì)對(duì)方有幫助。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的——就對(duì)方的問(wèn)題提建議

2．具體的建議

①努力學(xué)英語(yǔ)，增加與人交流的機(jī)會(huì)

②多交朋友，減少孤獨(dú)感

③積極參加各種活動(dòng)，豐富自己的生活

3．希望這些建議對(duì)對(duì)方有幫助，并希望對(duì)方接受

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語(yǔ) ）

have trouble (in) doing…..；adapt to； take one’s advice；work hard at；opportunity；communicate with；make friends；loneliness；take an active part in；make life interesting；find these ideas useful

第三步：連詞成句

1.You are having trouble adapting to your new school life in England.

2.This situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

3.You should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.

4.Why not make some friends?

5.You can take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting.

6.I hope you will find these ideas useful.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞)

表示時(shí)間順序： First of all; to begin/start with ,In the beginning

Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end

表示并列或補(bǔ)充關(guān)系： what is more; besides , moreover , apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile , in the meantime, some...some…others

表示轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：but , however, although , though , yet , while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果關(guān)系：because, as , therefore, As a result , as a consequence , consequently , thus

連句成文，運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，使句與句之間邏輯性更強(qiáng)、

段與段之間結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。