Question

【題目】請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

It's a question every socialmedia user faces after taking a great photo: Should I post this? Or is it going to come back to worry me? The questions get doubly complex when they involve children. A parent on average will post almost 1，000 photos of a child online before the child turns five, according to a recent survey. Are parents putting kids at risk by oversharing on social media?

Here are the selections of the views.

Lauren Apfel(US)

The big reason to share is to build a community. I live, for example, thousands of miles from my family. In this atmosphere of modern parenthood, we all struggle to make it through the day, and the Internet has become a source of support. In the early years of mothering twins, one of the things that brought me the most happiness was posting pictures of them on Facebook. Sharing those photos and engaging with an online community was a lifeline.

Dracarys(China)

I don't post pictures of my kids online because I don't like when friends of mine post photos of me online. It feels way too public and exhibitionist to me. So I treat my kids the way I want to be treated. That is probably what the parents who are comfortable with online photos think, too, when they decide to put the photos out there.

（寫作內容）

1. 用約30個單詞寫出上文概要。

2. 用約120個單詞闡述你對家長在社交網絡上分享孩子照片的看法，并用2—3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的理由。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句。

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

3. 不必寫標題

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Answer 1

【答案】Possible version 1：

While it is common for a parent to post children's photos nowadays, people take different attitudes toward it. Some think it's beneficial while others are anxious about it.

In my opinion, posting children's photos online is beneficial for people and makes a child better known. As a result, he is likely to have more chances to be successful in the future. It will also be easier for parents to communicate with other friends, for they have more to share with each other. Besides, it's a way to strengthen an online social circle and connect with people we don't know before.

Although there may be some disadvantages that come with posting children's photos, it's not necessary to be too cautious about it. We should have confidence in our society because we won't throw away the apple because of the core.

Possible version 2：

While it's common for a parent to post children's photos nowadays, people take different attitudes toward it. Some think it's beneficial while others are anxious about it.

In my opinion, it is not always the smartest or safest thing to do so. What parents view as delightful photos may be interpreted differently by others and give a false image of what the child is really like. Besides, there is a growing crime called “digital kidnapping” in which individuals or companies steal children's images and use them in advertisements or other commercial activities. Apart from the obvious dangers of identity theft, it can result in them being reshared and altered by other online users without permission, which may end up damaging their school status or future career prospects.

In short, although sharing children's photos online does have advantages, parents should be cautious about it.

【解析】

本書面表達屬于讀寫任務寫作�？忌�先要概括文章概要，然后對家長在社交網絡上分享孩子照片發(fā)表看法。

本書面表達屬于讀寫任務寫作。動筆前，首先要認真閱讀原文，并理解其內容。其次，認真看清題目要求，在稿子上列出提綱。最后，根據(jù)要求寫出文章。這篇書面表達寫作內容：1. 用約30個單詞寫出上文概要。2. 用約120個單詞闡述你對家長在社交網絡上分享孩子照片的看法，并用2—3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的理由。寫作要求：1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句。2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。3. 不必寫標題。寫作的時候，要按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，要注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。