三、開放作文(15分)
請根據下面提示,寫一篇短文。詞數不少于50。
In your English class,you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.
One possible version:
In the picture we can see two kids looking at the sun shining far away behinde the mountains , to which a winding path lead , obviously they are expecting a promising future , but there is a long way to go and they will meet with some difficulties and challenges on their way to their dream , the key to success is great determination and strong will , like the two kids , we are faced with difficulties and challenges every day ,it is only when we make up our minds and work heart and soul that we will live our lives to the fullest and reach our goal at last .
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第二節(jié)開放作文
請根據下面提示,寫一篇短文。詞數不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
基本分析:
1. 三分之一描寫要點:陽光,樓(很靠近),彎曲的樹。(the sun, two apartments/ flats closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree)
2. 三分之二議論著眼立意:
—— 1.人生角度:在成長的道路上(樹的成長),有曲折,有困難,(建筑的阻擋,彎曲)但是只要向著光明和希望(太陽)去努力拼搏,堅持不懈,還是能夠沖破桎梏取得成功(樹在樓的夾縫中長高了,超出建筑)。
—— 2.和諧角度: 城市的發(fā)展(建筑)和環(huán)境的可持續(xù)發(fā)展(樹的成長)要協調,要平衡,才能欣然共存(在陽光下)
3. 立意與現實生活關系:1. 引導90后要具有積極的生活態(tài)度,生活非一帆風順的。2. 扣住低碳生活的環(huán)保熱點,城市和環(huán)境的和諧發(fā)展也是低碳生活的必需。
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