Question

書面表達（滿分25分）

從電視上看到流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu）仍然在美國流行,你為你正在美國上學(xué)的筆友Jack的健康與安全擔(dān)心。請你給他寫一封信詢問他的情況，并給他提出防護建議。

要點：

一、詢問

1．他的健康狀況；

2．他們學(xué)校有無甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；

3．他們是否對這一大面積流行的疾病感到恐懼。

二、建議

1．盡量呆在家里，少去人多的地方；

2．勤洗手；講衛(wèi)生

3．多開窗，保持空氣新鮮；

4．多吃水果蔬菜。

注意：

1．字數(shù)：100左右；

2．首尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jack,

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Answer 1

One possible version :

Dear Mike,

From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I’m so worried about you. Are you all right? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Are you still afraid of this widespread disease?

To stay away from the disease, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.

So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you’ll be OK.

解析:

分析本文可以看出：你對美國上學(xué)的筆友Jack的健康與安全擔(dān)心，要點有三條：1．他的健康狀況；2．他們學(xué)校有無甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；3．他們是否對這一大面積流行的疾病感到恐懼。把握要點，分清層次：兩個重點層次：1.擔(dān)心；2.建議。合理過渡即可。