Question

【題目】假定你是李華，是紅星高中的學(xué)生會主席。為讓更多的人了解中國優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化，你校將舉辦中國傳統(tǒng)文化展（the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition)，請給你的外教Mr. Green寫封郵件，邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 時間、地點以及參加人員；

2. 文化展的宗旨；

3. 展出內(nèi)容：相關(guān)書籍、照片、繪畫、剪紙等。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Mr. Green,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Green,

I’m Li Hua, Chairman of HongXing High School. I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition to be held at the Academic Hall this Friday afternoon, from 3pm. to 5pm.

To enable more people to learn about the traditional Chinese culture, all the teachers, students and their parents as well as anyone interested in it are welcome to participate. At the exhibition, typical and representative books, photos, paintings, paper cutting and other related stuff will be presented, through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also enjoy the unique beauty of it.

If you’re interested, please come and appreciate it. I’ll be more than glad to offer any help.

Please reply to me at your earliest convenience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件；你要邀請你的外教Mr. Green參加你校舉辦的中國傳統(tǒng)文化展。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如time，place，content， Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition 等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如長句 I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Traditional Chinese Culture Exhibition to be held at the Academic Hall this Friday afternoon, from 3pm. to 5pm. 定語此句 At the exhibition, typical and representative books, photos, paintings, paper cutting and other related stuff will be presented, through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also enjoy the unique beauty of it.等。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。