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【題目】假定你是李華，你和你的同學(xué)們將在下周末舉辦一次活動(dòng)，針對“低頭族”這一問題， 提醒過往的人們不要在行走時(shí)看手機(jī)，盡量抬起頭來，注意安全與健康。請給你的英國朋 友Henry寫封郵件，邀請他一起參加。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

注意：1.行文連貫流暢；2.參考詞匯：低頭族：phubber 3.詞數(shù)100詞左右 Dear Henry,

How's everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Henry,

How’s everything going? Next weekend my classmates will hold an activity against phubbers in the street. I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.

The mobile phone has brought us much convenience. However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around. Obviously, it can be harmful to their physical health and safety. Therefore, let’s work together to call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold their heads up in the street.

An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated. If you are willing, let’s meet at our school gate at 8 o’clock next Sunday morning.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一封邀請信：假定你是李華，你和你的同學(xué)們將在下周末舉辦一次活動(dòng)，針對“低頭族”這一問題， 提醒過往的人們不要在行走時(shí)看手機(jī)，盡量抬起頭來，注意安全與健康。請給你的英國朋 友Henry寫封郵件，邀請他一起參加，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； phubber（低頭族），convenience（保便利），invite（邀請），harmful（有害的），physical health（身體健康）及safety（安全）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。