Question

寒假將至，班級里很多同學(xué)都打算去海南度假。就選擇何種交通方式，班級進行了一場討論。請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，客觀地討論情況，并闡述你自己的觀點。

60%的同學(xué)選擇坐飛機	40%的同學(xué)選擇坐火車
1.速度快；	1.價格便宜
2.環(huán)境舒適；	2.能觀賞沿途的風景；
3······	3······

注意：字數(shù)120左右，文章開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）

The winter vacation approaching, there has been a heated discussion about the means of transport by which we like to travel to Hainan. _______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________

Answer 1

One possible version:

The winter vacation approaching ,there has been a heated discussion about the means of transport by which we like to travel to Hainan. Opinions are divided on this problem. About 60% of the classmates are in favor of the idea to take plane. In their opinions, nothing can match a plane for speed. Besides, the popularity of plane is due to the clean and comfortable environment and excellent service. While, 40% of the classmates show interest in taking train. The reason can be listed as follows. Firstly, compared with plane, the cost for a trip by train is quite low. Secondly, taking train, they can enjoy the natural beauty, which will be an unforgettable experience.

As far as I am concerned, I'd like to choose to travel in a train for safety and reasonable price. With beautiful scenery always in sight, train is my favorite form of transport in the travel.

【解析】

審題：題目中要求根據(jù)表中所提供的信息，客觀地討論情況，并闡述自己的觀點。作者在第一段中首先說明60%的人傾向于做飛機，因為速度快并且環(huán)境舒適，然后又說明40%的同學(xué)會選擇火車為交通工具，因為價格便宜并且能欣賞沿途的風景。最后，作者表達自己的觀點，自己會選擇火車，因為價格更加實惠，而且路上的風景十分優(yōu)美。從而可以看出，作者在審題方面做得非常好，非常扣題。寫作技巧：作者根據(jù)題目中要求來完成寫作任務(wù)，條理清晰；文中運用了“Besides”“While”“Firstly”“Secondly”“As far as I am concerned”等連接詞使行文更加流暢；文中使用了一些固定短語及搭配：be divided，attend school，in favor of，due to，compare with等使文章顯得很干練；文中使用了較多的語法知識，定語從句they can enjoy the natural beauty, which will be an unforgettable experience，結(jié)果狀語從句With beautiful scenery always in sight, train is my favourite form of transport in the travel。這些從句等語法的使用提升了文章的檔次，將基本要點清晰地呈現(xiàn)在讀者面前，同時也顯示較高的語法知識點使用能力。問題指出：作者在陳述同學(xué)們選擇飛機或者火車的原因時，僅僅用了表中分別提供的兩點信息，沒有增加一些信息，思維比較局限。

考點：考查材料類議論文作文。