分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息最近在你們班上的一次英語 Talking Show 上,大家談到了喂養(yǎng)寵物的事,同學(xué)們對于喂養(yǎng)寵物持不同意見.請你用英語寫一篇短文,介紹他們對喂養(yǎng)寵物的不同觀點,并表達你的看法,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:分別從不同觀點和理由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:are in favour of 支持;are against反對;in harmony with和諧相處;thus因此;However然而;a waste of 浪費…Besides另外;More importantly更重要的是; Personally就個人而言;
The supporters think keeping pets shows that they can live in harmony with nature,in which people can develop their inner minds.(高分句型一)
For old people,keeping pets can bring them joy,thus driving away their loneness when their family are not beside them.(高分句型二)
But pets must be kept on condition that they don't cause trouble to others.(高分句型三)
解答 We have had a heated discussion about keeping pets on our English Talking Show recently.Some are in favour of keeping pets,while others are against it.
The supporters think keeping pets shows that they can live in harmony with nature,in which people can develop their inner minds.(高分句型一)For old people,keeping pets can bring them joy,thus driving away their loneness when their family are not beside them.(高分句型二)
However,those who are against it argue that it is a waste of time,money and energy.Besides,pets often make our living environment dirty and smelly.More importantly,pets may sometimes attack people.
Personally,I think it's one's freedom to decide whether to keep pets or not.But pets must be kept on condition that they don't cause trouble to others.(高分句型三)
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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