Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除

或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

(試題內(nèi)容如下)

It’s very kind for you to let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about your beautiful hometown. It located on the bank of a river and it is a beautiful place to live in. Its economy has been developing rapid in the past 2 decades. More schools and hospitals are available to people. Besides, there are some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffics in rush hours. In my opinion, my hometown should develop its economy scientifically. Something must be doing to prevent water and air pollution or the growth of its population should be brought under the control so that we’ll have a better hometown.

 

Answer 1

1.for ---of

2.your—my

3.located 前加is

4.rapid—rapidly

5.to ---for

6.Besides ---However

7.traffcis –traffic

8.doing –done

9.or –and

10.去掉the

【解析】

試題分析：在本文中作者向朋友介紹了自己美麗的家鄉(xiāng)。他的家鄉(xiāng)位于河邊，是一個(gè)美麗的適宜居住的地方。在過(guò)去的的二十年間經(jīng)濟(jì)得到了很大的發(fā)展。但是同時(shí)帶來(lái)了諸如空氣，水等方面的污染問(wèn)題。為了有一個(gè)更美好的家鄉(xiāng)，一定要采取措施去控制污染。

1.for ---of考查介詞。It’s very kind for you to let me know about your beautiful city. 固定句型：It is kind of sb to do sth ，“某人這樣做真是太好了”， 所以把for改為of。

2.your—my考查代詞。Now I’d like to tell you something about your beautiful hometown. 根據(jù)上句內(nèi)容可知是“I”要介紹的是“我”家鄉(xiāng)的情況，把your改為my。

3.located 前加is考查動(dòng)詞。It located on the bank of a river。固定短語(yǔ)：be located in/on 坐落于….。本文用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)主謂一致原則在located前加is。

4.rapid—rapidly考查副詞。. Its economy has been developing rapid in the past 2 decades. 此處是修飾動(dòng)詞develop應(yīng)該用副詞形式，把rapid改為rapidly。

5.to ---for考查介詞。More schools and hospitals are available to people. 固定短語(yǔ)：be available for “有效；對(duì)…有用”。句意：更多學(xué)校和醫(yī)院可以讓人們使用。

6.Besides ---However考查副詞。Besides, there are some problems, such as water and air pollution。根據(jù)前后句內(nèi)容可知此處是表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而不是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，所以把Besides改為However。

7.traffcis –traffic考查名詞。and heavy traffics in rush hours. Traffic是不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以把traffics改為traffic。

8.doing –done考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。Something must be doing to prevent water and air pollution。從內(nèi)容可知此處是表示被動(dòng)，結(jié)構(gòu)是：情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be +done，所以把doing改為done。

9.or –and考查連詞。Something must be doing to prevent water and air pollution or the growth of its population should be brought under the control。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知此處是water，air pollution 和the growth of its population是并列關(guān)系，是都需要控制的問(wèn)題，所以把or改為and。

10.去掉the考查冠詞。Something must be doing to prevent water and air pollution or the growth of its population should be brought under the control。固定短語(yǔ)：under control“在控制下”，把the去掉。

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