【題目】李教授有著一套獨(dú)特的植樹(shù)方法：他種樹(shù)不是過(guò)分細(xì)心照看，而是讓其在艱苦的環(huán)境中自由地生長(zhǎng)。結(jié)合“個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)需要艱難生活的磨礪”這一話題談?wù)勀愕目捶�，寫一�?20詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）：

1. 你是否認(rèn)同李教授的做法，為什么？

2. 敘述當(dāng)前獨(dú)生子女廣泛得到父母溺愛(ài)的現(xiàn)象，并由此產(chǎn)生一些不良后果；

3. 假如你是父母一方，你會(huì)用何種方式來(lái)教育和磨礪自己的孩子？

As we all know, Professor Li has a special way of planting trees.

【答案】

As we all know, professor Li has a special way of planting trees. He doesn’t take too much care of his trees, just letting them survive and grow in the bad environment freely.

I thorough agree with what professor does. The trees could have strong perseverance to survive by themselves. As long as they have their survival ability, they will grow healthy.

Today under the system of the birth control in our country, every family has only one child. So parents do everything they could to meet their children’s needs. However, all parents do is not help their children but to destroy them.

If I were a parent, I would make my child do more hard work and experience a variety of sufferings and hardships as much as possible. I would also teach my child to undertake the responsibilities of the family and society.

【解析】這是一篇議論文寫作。根據(jù)作文提示：結(jié)合“個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)需要艱難生活的磨礪”這一話題，然后表明自己的觀點(diǎn)是贊同還是反對(duì)李教授的植樹(shù)方法，并提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，再議論，清晰表達(dá)，并且要不失亮點(diǎn)，準(zhǔn)確把握英文句子的書(shū)寫，避免出現(xiàn)漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)的現(xiàn)象�！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文共四段，依次按照寫作提示的三個(gè)問(wèn)題一一來(lái)陳述。格式很標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，雖結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單，但是層次清晰，其中也用了一些高級(jí)的句型，使得文章水平在一個(gè)高的層面，如: I thorough agree with what professor does.賓語(yǔ)從句；As long as they have their survival ability, they will grow healthy.主從復(fù)合句；He doesn’t take too much care of his trees, just letting them survive and grow in the bad environment freely.伴隨狀語(yǔ)；If I were a parent, I would make my child do more hard work and experience a variety of sufferings and hardships as much as possible.虛擬語(yǔ)氣等；還采用了一些比較好的短語(yǔ)，正確地加以運(yùn)用：not……but，不是，而是；meet sb’s needs,滿足某人的需要；agree with同意；如這些都給文章帶來(lái)了亮點(diǎn)。

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