Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

Dear John，

I am so glad hear from you. Learn that you are working on Chinese, I strongly recommend the novel Journey to the West. The novel is one of the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature. It tells about a Buddhist monk and his three disciples, animal with human characteristic，traveling west to India in search for Buddhist scriptures. I think, the study of this novel open the way to Chinese values and history, from what you will get a better understanding of Chinese culture. Beside, the novel offers a mixture of adventure and comedy, so while enjoying reading, you will surprisingly find you can speak and write in Chinese more fluent.

I hope you keep reading to enjoy the charm of Chinese language but you will achieve a great progress in your Chinese.

Answer 1

【答案】1. glad和hear之間添加to

2. Learn→Learning

3. animal→animals

4. for→of

5. open→opens

6. what→ which

7. Beside→Besides

8. fluent→fluently

9. but→and

10. great前的a刪除

【解析】

這是一封推薦信，寫信人推薦了《西游記》。

第一處：考查固定搭配。be glad to do sth為固定搭配，意為“高興做某事”，故glad和hear之間添加to。

第二處：考查非謂語(yǔ)。分析可知recommend是句子的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，learn在句中做狀語(yǔ)，是非謂語(yǔ)。learn與其邏輯主語(yǔ)之間I之間是邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，要用其現(xiàn)在分詞形式。故將Learn改成Learning。

第三處：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。animal為可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)語(yǔ)境這里要表達(dá)的是“有人類特性的動(dòng)物們”，表達(dá)的是復(fù)數(shù)意義，應(yīng)該用其復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將animal改成animals。

第四處：考查介詞。in search of為固定搭配，意為“尋找”，故將for改成of。

第五處：考查時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致。open的主語(yǔ)是the study of this novel，the study of this novel表達(dá)的是單數(shù)意義，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也要用單數(shù)，且本句為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。故將open改成opens。

第六處：考查定語(yǔ)從句。from what you will get a better understanding of Chinese culture是一個(gè)非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，what不能引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，what錯(cuò)誤。分析可知先行詞是前面整個(gè)句子，關(guān)系詞在從句中做介詞from的賓語(yǔ)，要用which引導(dǎo)這個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。故將what改成which。

第七處：考查副詞。句意：此外，這本小說(shuō)融合了冒險(xiǎn)和喜劇。Beside位于句首修飾整個(gè)句子，修飾整個(gè)句子應(yīng)該用副詞而不是介詞，beside 是介詞，意指“在...旁邊”既不符合句意,語(yǔ)法上也用法錯(cuò)誤。besides 是副詞，指“除...以外, 還有...”符合句意，故將Beside改成Besides。

第八處：考查副詞。修飾動(dòng)詞write應(yīng)該用副詞，故將fluent改成fluently。

第九處：考查連詞。句意：希望你繼續(xù)閱讀以享受中文的魅力并且你的中文將會(huì)取得很大的進(jìn)步。根據(jù)句意，I hope you keep reading to enjoy the charm of Chinese language和you will achieve a great progress in your Chinese.之間是并列關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用and連接這兩個(gè)句子。故將but改成and。

第十處：考查冠詞。progress不可數(shù)，應(yīng)該用零冠詞修飾progress。故將a去掉。