Question

最近，不少城市發(fā)出了“減少白色污染”的倡議，得到廣大市民的支持。請以“ People should not be encouraged to use plastic bags ”為話題在博客上發(fā)表簡單評論。

注意：詞數(shù)120左右。參考詞匯：可分解的degradable 窒息choke

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Plastic bags are very popular in our daily life. People go shopping with plastic bags in free markets, super markets, or departments.

But plastic bags are one of the major pollutants. We can see littered plastic bags thrown everywhere, especially along the railways or highways, in the parks or in the rivers. Because plastics is not degradable, once it is thrown in the environment, it will exist for a long time and pollute soil and water. They are even dangerous to wildlife as thousands of sea animals are killed each year when they eat or are choked by plastic bags. What’s more, “white pollution” creates a bad image for China.

So government should make a law to forbid the use of plastic bags in department stores and supermarkets. Meanwhile, people should be encouraged to replace them with paper bags or cloth bags.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求以“ People should not be encouraged to use plastic bags ”為話題在博客上對于最近很多城市發(fā)出的 “減少白色污染”的倡議進(jìn)行簡單的評論。文章只是給出了話題，沒有列出要點(diǎn)，屬于半開放性作文。但是污染是同學(xué)們耳熟能詳?shù)脑掝}，內(nèi)容接近生活，學(xué)生們都能做到有話可說。不過在寫作時要注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的安排要合理，應(yīng)該首先提出問題，然后分析問題，最后解決問題，也就是提出解決的方法。對于這個話題同學(xué)們雖然會有很多話說，但是一定不要只是做到現(xiàn)象或者方法的簡單羅列，而是應(yīng)該使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，以使文章語言通順，內(nèi)容連貫。還要盡量多使用高級詞匯和多種句式，此外還要注意文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文采用經(jīng)典的三段式圍繞著“ People should not be encouraged to use plastic bags ”這一話題展開論述。首先作者提出了塑料袋在日常生活中普遍使用這一現(xiàn)象，然后用But plastic bags are one of the major pollutants.作為過渡句和主題句開始了對塑料袋對環(huán)境的危害進(jìn)行介紹。最后得出結(jié)論So government should make a law to forbid the use of plastic bags in department stores and supermarkets.緊扣文章中心。在文中作者還使用了But，So等連詞有效起到了過渡的作用，而且還使用了what’s more，meanwhile等詞使文章內(nèi)容銜接緊湊，語言通順流暢。

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