Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你上個(gè)星期天去市圖書館看書時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)以下問(wèn)題，你寫信向館長(zhǎng)Mr Li反映：
1．新書太少；
2．書架上的書比較混亂；
3．閱覽室的一盞燈壞了；
4．管理員工作時(shí)彼此閑聊。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100~120左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Li,
Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library._______________________________
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So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all these as soon as possible.
Yours, 
Li Hua

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear Mr. Li,
Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library. Over the time 1 was there, I found something unpleasant. Therefore, I' d like to voice my opinions, which, I hope, would be of help for you to create a more comfortable place for readers.
First, there are few new books on the shelves, and most books are not popular today. Second, some books are not sorted in proper order, making it difficult for readers to find what they want quickly. Third, the assistants didn't offer good service. Instead, they were chatting. In addition, they took no notice of the fact that a light wasn't working. Leave this state of affairs to stay the same, and I am afraid there will be fewer and fewer readers.
So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all these as soon as possible.
Yours, 
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇以寫信形式的作文，注意信的格式，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。