Question

19．將要進入高三，許多同學(xué)面臨高考，懂得努力學(xué)習；同時，心理壓力增加，與父母、同學(xué)關(guān)系緊張，容易發(fā)怒，甚至為小事與同學(xué)爭吵等．
針對這種情況，談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⑻岢龈倪M意見．
要點：
1．目前情況；
2．個人的改進意見（至少兩條）．
注意：
1．開頭已給出（不記入總詞數(shù)）；
2.120個詞左右．
We are becoming students of Senior Grade Three．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We find it difficult to get along well with our classmates，teachers and even parents．
高分句型二：
Besides，talking with teachers and parents with respect is a good way to reduce pressure，and they will give us some good advice in time．
句型一 We find it difficult to get along well with our classmates 該句中有使用到it，it在該句中是一個形式賓語，真正的賓語為不定式：to get along well
句型二 talking with teachers and parents with respect is a..該句的主語為動名詞短語充當，動名詞以及動名詞短語充當主語應(yīng)注意，謂語使用單數(shù)

解答 We are  becoming students of Senior Grade Three． All of us will face the fierce competition in the Entrance Examination for college next year．Most of us students know the importance of revisions and preparations．We work hard at our lessons．Meanwhile，some are suffering from gre ater tension/pressure than ever．We find it difficult to get along well with our classmates，teachers and even parents．（情況說明）（高分句型一）It is easy for us to lose our temper and quarrels often break out over something important．
    Personally，we should try to change the situations as well as ourselves．Anyway，competitions do exist in our life．We should learn to adjust to them rather than escape．Calming down in face of difficulty can win us a more peaceful mind．Besides，talking with teachers and parents with respect is a good way to reduce pressure，and they will give us some good advice in time．（高分句型二）Taking more exercise outdoors can also help us relax．
   In short，we should learn to keep the balance between study and relaxation and try to make our life meaningful and happy．（個人意見）

點評 該書面表達為開放類，該類作文一般沒有具體的寫作要點，寫作時考生可以在合理的范圍內(nèi)發(fā)散思維．另外考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．