第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題，每題1分，滿分10分）

    假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句最多有兩處.錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加,刪除和修改.

增加:把缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該詞.

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉.

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.

注意:1.每處錯誤極其修改均限一詞.

2.只允許修改10處,多者從第11處不記分.

Dear Jin Jing,

    Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．

Yours,

Lily

短文改錯：Your problem is ∧common one among middle school students．Maybe the

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following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest

advice                 of

problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile

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any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking

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with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you．You

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can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your

hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．

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Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．

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