【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ \）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

In common to other new mommies, I find that difficult to balance career with motherhood. Comparing with my life before, my present life is always in hurry. In an attempt to be a qualified teacher, I work hardly in school. At the same time, I want to be referred to as a qualified mother as well as. Therefore, back at home, I have to stay with my babies until she fell asleep. But sometimes I am on the point of falling asleep while she wakes up. Exhausted as I am, I feel everything I have gone through for the past few months are totally worthwhile the moment I catch sight of her smiles.

【答案】

【1】to改為with

【2】that改為it

【3】comparing改為compared

【4】in后加a

【5】hardly改為hard

【6】刪除as

【7】刪除at

【8】fell改為falls

【9】while改為when

【10】are改為is

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述了新生兒的媽媽很難在生活和工作中找到平衡。

【1】to改為with 考查介詞短語(yǔ)。介詞短語(yǔ)in common with...與...有共同之處；句意：和其他的新媽媽英語(yǔ)，我也發(fā)現(xiàn)在工作和做媽媽之間取得平衡很困難。

【2】that改為it 考查it用法。本句中it是形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)是后面的不定式to balance career with motherhood.代詞that是不能做形式賓語(yǔ)的、

【3】comparing改為compared 考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)compared with與...相比，該短語(yǔ)在句中通常單獨(dú)做狀語(yǔ)。句意：和我之前的生活相比，我現(xiàn)在的生活很匆忙。

【4】in后加a 考查固定搭配。介詞短語(yǔ)in a hurry匆忙地；其中的a是不能省略的。

【5】hardly改為hard 考查固定搭配。副詞hardly幾乎不，表示否定含義；hard艱難；動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)work hard努力。

【6】刪除as 考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)as well也，后面不加其他成分；而as well as是介詞短語(yǔ)，后面要接名詞或代詞做賓語(yǔ)。

【7】刪除at 考查副詞。本句中home是副詞，要單獨(dú)使用，不接介詞。“back home”意為“回到家里”。

【8】fell改為falls 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文全篇都是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，介紹新母親的生活。本句時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句中使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替將來(lái)時(shí)。

【9】while改為when 考查連詞。while從句中動(dòng)詞不能是短暫性動(dòng)詞，而when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句中，動(dòng)詞可以是短暫性也可以是延續(xù)性的。本句中wake up蘇醒，是短暫性動(dòng)詞，所以使用when引導(dǎo)這個(gè)從句。

【10】are改為is 考查數(shù)的一致。本句的主語(yǔ)是everything,句中的I have gone through for the past few months是定語(yǔ)從句修飾everything，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要和everything保持一致，所以使用單數(shù)形式is。

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