Question

【題目】假定你是李華，計(jì)劃十一和同學(xué)一起去爬賀蘭山。請(qǐng)你給外教Nancy 寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)她一同前往。Helan Moutain賀蘭山

內(nèi)容包括：

1.集合時(shí)間及其地點(diǎn)；

2.活動(dòng)安排及提醒；

3.午餐及返程時(shí)間。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Nancy,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Nancy,

My classmates and I are planning to climbing Helan Mountain on October 1st. We all hope you can join us. Here is the schedule.

We are to meet at the school gate at 8 o’clock on October 1st.Since we will climbing mountains ,you’d better wear comfortable clothes and shoes. If necessary, you can wear your sunglasses. Besides,we’ll have a picnic on the top of the mountain,everyone is expected to bring their lunch and share it. We may return at around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.

Would you like to join us? Hope to see you then.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件：假定你是李華，計(jì)劃十一和同學(xué)一起去爬賀蘭山。請(qǐng)你給外教Nancy 寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)她一同前往HelanMoutain賀蘭山。內(nèi)容包括：

1.集合時(shí)間及其地點(diǎn)；2.活動(dòng)安排及提醒；3.午餐及返程時(shí)間。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：planning to climbing（計(jì)劃爬）；Here is the schedule.（這是時(shí)刻表。）；at the school gate（在校門口）；if necessary（如果必要）；等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。