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增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Recently, our class have a heated discussion about Charles Gray, an ex-millionaire, who has turned his back on his millions and find different ways to be happy in her life.

Some students thought he was wrong to give up his huge house and $2 millions. Without money, his life would be like to be hard. In fact, it is money who has the most important role to play in happy life.

Other didn’t agree with this point of view. They thought Charles was happy live in a small dormitory where there was only a second-hand furniture. It was very great of him to be determined to give all his money out to charities. They believed people which had only a little money were freer and much happier.

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文章大意：文章主要講述班級(jí)學(xué)生對(duì)前百萬富翁舍棄了他的百萬財(cái)富這件事進(jìn)行熱烈的討論。

第一處：時(shí)態(tài)用法錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)前句可知，這里用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。句意：他舍棄了他的百萬財(cái)富。故將find改為found。

第二處：代詞用法錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)前面的his可知，這里同樣用his。句意：在他的生活中找到了不同的快樂的方式。故將her改為his。

第三處：數(shù)詞用法錯(cuò)誤。如果在million前面加數(shù)字的話,則million是不可以加s的。句意：一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為，他放棄豪宅和200萬美元是錯(cuò)誤的。故將millions改為million。

第四處：短語用法錯(cuò)誤。短語be likely to有可能。句意：沒有錢，他的生活可能會(huì)很艱難。故將like改為likely。

第五處：強(qiáng)調(diào)句用法錯(cuò)誤。強(qiáng)調(diào)主語money，故用that引導(dǎo)強(qiáng)調(diào)句。句意：幸福生活中最重要的是金錢。故將who改為that。

第六處：代詞用法錯(cuò)誤。other是除自己外的“別人”，others是指其他人。句意：其他人不同意此觀點(diǎn)。故將other改為others。

第七處：短語用法錯(cuò)誤。be happy to do做某事很高興。句意：他們認(rèn)為查爾斯很樂意住在一間小宿舍里。故在happy后加to。

第八處：冠詞用法錯(cuò)誤。名詞furniture為不可數(shù)名詞，故不需要用冠詞。句意：那里只有二手家具。故將a去掉。

第九處：短語用法錯(cuò)誤。give away捐贈(zèng)。句意：他決心把所有的錢都捐給慈善機(jī)構(gòu)。故將out改為away。

第十處：定語從句用法錯(cuò)誤。句中先行詞為people，在從句中作主語，故用關(guān)系代詞who/that。句意：他們相信只有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)錢的人更自由，更快樂。故將which改為who/that。

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