Question

2．假如你是李華，最近從email得知你的筆友Tom因缺乏鍛煉和不均衡的飲食習(xí)慣而生病在家，心里很煩躁．請(qǐng)給Tom寫封信安慰他，并就健康的生活習(xí)慣提出你的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Tom，
      ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
First of all，you had better have a good sleep every day so that you can be active and energetic during the day．
首先，你最好有一個(gè)良好的睡眠每一天，這樣你可以在白天活動(dòng)和活力．
高分句型二：
You need not worry about your study since you are a hard-working boy，and I am sure you will recover soon．
你不需要對(duì)你的學(xué)習(xí)擔(dān)心，因?yàn)槟闶且粋�(gè)勤奮的男孩，我相信你會(huì)很快恢復(fù)．

解答 Dear Tom，
I am sad to hear that you have been ill in bed for days．I know from your email that it is because you don't exercise enough and keep a balanced diet that you get ill．Therefore，I suggest you give up your unhealthy lifestyle and live a healthy life．
First of all，you had better have a good sleep every day so that you can be active and energetic during the day（高分句型一）．Secondly，you should eat more fruit and vegetables and drink more water．Do not eat too much junk food as they are not good for your health．Above all，you should spend more time doing exercise and less time playing computer games．
You need not worry about your study since you are a hard-working boy，and I am sure you will recover soon（高分句型二）．
                                                                    Yours，
                                                                    Li Lua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．