Question

【題目】請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。

Li Jiang

When I was in the primary school, I often met with problems which I could not work out on my own, especially in English and arithmetic. So I downloaded an online educational app named Zuoyebang. Since then, I have been using several kinds of such software, for example, Xuebajun and Haofenshu. Whenever I have a problem, I will turn to them. As a result, my study has been progressing steadily. I will strongly recommend these apps to my friends.

Li Jiang

When I was in the primary school, I often met with problems which I could not work out on my own, especially in English and arithmetic. So I downloaded an online educational app named Zuoyebang. Since then, I have been using several kinds of such software, for example, Xuebajun and Haofenshu. Whenever I have a problem, I will turn to them. As a result, my study has been progressing steadily. I will strongly recommend these apps to my friends.

Su Hua

After entering the senior high, I found I had more and more difficulty learning maths and English. As many online learning products are quite popular among other students, my parents subscribed to one for me too. After that, however, I feel as if I were going to two schools, one real-world school and one online school. Every day I have endless exercises to do and feel very tired. Worse still, I feel I have lost interest in my study now. What shall I do?

Su Hua

After entering the senior high, I found I had more and more difficulty learning maths and English. As many online learning products are quite popular among other students, my parents subscribed to one for me too. After that, however, I feel as if I were going to two schools, one real-world school and one online school. Every day I have endless exercises to do and feel very tired. Worse still, I feel I have lost interest in my study now. What shall I do?

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約30個詞概括上述利用在線教育app學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)象；

2. 你是支持還是反對利用在線教育app學(xué)習(xí)？請談?wù)勀愕目捶�，并�?/span>2 – 3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

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Answer 1

【答案】As the Internet combines deeply with education, online learning apps are springing up. Many students have adopted them as efficient learning tools, which may also have negative effects on other students. (31詞)

In my opinion, online learning apps are an inseparable part of a student’s life and should be welcomed. After all they are of great help to our study. For example, when I meet with a problem I can’t work out after a few attempts, I will turn to my tutors there. A simple click of the button will bring me the answers, often with detailed analysis and different solutions. Besides, by participating in activities such as talent shows on such websites, I have enjoyed myself and gained confidence.

Of course, it is unwise to rely wholly on such online learning apps. However, they can serve as good helpers to us if we learn to employ their advantages and avoid the disadvantages. (153詞)

【解析】

本文是一篇讀寫任務(wù)類書面表達(dá)，要求考生用約30個詞概括利用在線教育app學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)象；說明自己是支持還是反對在線app學(xué)習(xí)，并提出自己的看法。本文對考生運用語言能力及思維能力要求極高，難度非常大。

第1步：審題。根據(jù)文字提示可知本文是一篇議論文，要求考生概括利用在線教育app學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)象；說明自己是支持還是反對在線app學(xué)習(xí)，并提出自己的看法。

第2步：組織要點。短文概要：隨著因特網(wǎng)和教育的結(jié)合，在線教育蓬勃發(fā)展，很多學(xué)生都運用了再線教育，同時這種學(xué)習(xí)新模式也有一些負(fù)面影響。個人觀點：在線教育是學(xué)生生活中重要的一部分，對學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)有一定幫助。但是完全依靠在線教育也是錯誤的，應(yīng)該本在線教育當(dāng)成學(xué)校教育的有益補(bǔ)充。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞組進(jìn)行遣詞造句，關(guān)鍵詞為combine with、spring up、adopt … as efficient learning tools、have negative effects on 、of great help to、work out、gained confidence、serve as good helpers 等。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。