Question

16．假定你是李華，今年高考結(jié)束后，你打算和同學(xué)們?yōu)槟池毨�山區(qū)的孩子們舉行一次捐贈活動．請給你的外教露西寫封郵件，希望她能參加，內(nèi)容包括：
1．捐贈的時間和地點(diǎn)：2016年6月10日上午，校體育館；
2．捐贈的物品及意義等．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．結(jié)束語以為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
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Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                Yours，
                                                                Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封邀請函．寫作時，首先要寫清要點(diǎn)，包括：活動的背景，具體時間和地點(diǎn)，活動的內(nèi)容和意義；其次要注意以第一人稱來表達(dá)；最后要注意時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
live a hard life 生活困難
call on 號召
be willing to do sth 愿意做某事
make a difference 起作用，有影響
we do hope all of us will try our best to do something for them．
句中do位于謂語動詞前，強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語，是一個強(qiáng)調(diào)句．
we'll collect some clothes，books or even money in the gym，which will be sent to the poor areas later．
句中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句．
not only will the children enjoy a happy life but also they'll have a good education．
句中not only…but also…連接并列句，not only位于句首時，句中要部分倒裝．

解答 Dear Lucy，
At present，there are many children in the poor areas still living a hard life．They don't have enough food to eat or clothes to wear．Furthermore，they can't afford to attend school．In order to call on everyone to help the poor children in the mountainous areas，we do hope all of us will try our best to do something for them．（高分句型一）（介紹活動背景）
 On the morning of June 10th，2016，we'll collect some clothes，books or even money in the gym，which will be sent to the poor areas later．（高分句型二）If you are willing to donate something to the poor children，do come to the gym in time．（說明活動內(nèi)容和時間地點(diǎn)）
With your help，not only will the children enjoy a happy life but also they'll have a good education．（高分句型三）Meanwhile，you'll feel happy by making a difference．I hope you can take part in the activity．Thank you!（說明活動意義并發(fā)出邀請）
Yours
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．