Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Attention please, everyone. I have announcement to make. You will pay a visit to the museum on October 1st I think we will be interest in it. In the course of the visit, the guide will give us an account of the past or the development of the city. She say something about the advanced workers, included some teachers. We will see many pictures there .I am sure of that we can learn a lot. After the visit, we will have a discussion in group and each of us must write a composition. We are to star out as earlier as 7:20 a.m. . We must gather against time at the school gate . That's all, Thanks.

Answer 1

【答案】1. an

2.We

3.interested

4. and

5. will say

6.including

7.of去掉

8.groups

9.early

10.on/in

【解析】announcement是名詞，名詞在句子中要么用復(fù)數(shù)，要么前面有a/an冠詞修飾。根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容可知“我”有一個(gè)消息要宣告，announcement是以元音字母開頭的單詞，故announcement前加an.

本文通篇提到眾人的時(shí)候使用的都是“we”，本處的“you”你們。有些突兀。故將you 改為we.

固定搭配be interested in，意為對……感興趣。故將interest改為interested。

“ I think we will be interest in it. In the course of the visit”和“the guide will give us an account of the past or the development of the city.”是兩個(gè)完整的句子，兩句在同一個(gè)句子中是并列關(guān)系，用and連接。故the guide前加and。

5.She和we是一起的，二者的動(dòng)作是同時(shí)進(jìn)行的，而且此處未來參觀博物的活動(dòng)，要用將來時(shí)。故在say前加will。

6.固定搭配sth included，including sth，意為包括……。故將included改為including。

7.sure后接從句不需要介詞。故將of刪去。

8.學(xué)生們是分組討論的，一組是意見統(tǒng)一。故將group改為groups。

9.earlier是比較級，as……as結(jié)構(gòu)中，中間填的是原形，故將earlier改為early。

10.時(shí)間前面要加on或in。故在7:20 a.m前加on/in。