Share with others, and sadness will be greatly lessened/reduced while happiness will be doubled.
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上的話(huà)寫(xiě)一篇不少于120詞的英語(yǔ)短文,如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
注意:
①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題;
②除詩(shī)歌外,文體不限;
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例;
④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。
We are living in a world in which sharing is so important that we can never emphasize its importance too much. By sharing we can often greatly lessen our sadness and double our happiness.
When it comes to this topic, memories flood into my mind. There was a time when I was caught in the sadness of failing an important exam, my world turned grey and I lost interest in everything until my best friend came up to comfort me. Encouraged and moved by his kindness, I shared with him, which relieved me of troubles soon. Little by little, I regained confidence. The following months witnessed my efforts, and I finally made progress in another important exam.
As you can see, it was sharing with my friend that helped me out of the dark moment and brought back my confidence. Sharing is beautiful, not only physically but also psychologically.
【解析】本題主要根據(jù):跟他人分享,悲傷會(huì)減少快樂(lè)會(huì)增加寫(xiě)一篇文章,即主要圍繞分享的話(huà)題。本題要求結(jié)合日常生活,最佳題材是記敘文。范文為經(jīng)典的三段論式寫(xiě)作,第一段引出話(huà)題,第二段講述生活實(shí)例,最后一段表達(dá)感想,結(jié)構(gòu)脈絡(luò)十分清晰。范文第一段第一句We are living in a world in which sharing is so important that we can never emphasize its importance too much.首先使用了in which領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,且使用了so…that如此...以致句式;第二段第一句When it comes to this topic, memories flood into my mind.使用了when領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句;第二段第二句There was a time when I was caught in the sadness of failing an important exam使用了when領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句;第二段第三句Encouraged and moved by his kindness, I shared with him, which relieved me of troubles soon.使用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ),以及which領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句;最后一段第一句it was sharing with my friend that helped me out of the dark moment and brought back my confidence.使用了it is. …that強(qiáng)調(diào)句句型。范文使用了許多好的短語(yǔ),包括:come to涉及到,be caught in陷入,Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn),bring back拿回等常用短語(yǔ)。在詞語(yǔ)使用上本文最大亮點(diǎn)就是帶有強(qiáng)烈情感的詞語(yǔ)的使用,如第二段my world turned grey我的世界變灰了grey一詞的使用,表現(xiàn)出了當(dāng)時(shí)的絕望,最后一段helped me out of the dark moment中dark一詞的使用,使得文章感情色彩十分濃厚。總結(jié):對(duì)于需要結(jié)合日常生活的作文,寫(xiě)作記敘文較好。
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