Question

【題目】微信朋友圈似乎已經(jīng)成為我們與朋友溝通交流必不可少的工具，目前很多中學生也都開通了微信，在朋友圈里發(fā)表一些自己的感想。你想讓父母看你的朋友圈嗎？某英語報社就這一問題做了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下：

40%同意	60%反對
父母可以了解我們的思想動態(tài)，及時溝通； 父母可以保護我們不受欺； ……	每個人都需要隱私，朋友圈是我們的私人空間； 我們與父母之間有代溝，讓他們看我們的朋友圈可能產(chǎn)生誤會； ……

請根據(jù)以上信息寫一篇短文，向該報社描述這一現(xiàn)象，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于100字。

參考詞匯：微信Wechat 朋友圈Moments

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays,it seems that the Moments section of Wechat has become a popular part of the social networking platform.But do you think parents should be allowed to see their children's Moments?According to the newly- conducted survey above,the results are as follows:

40% of the students surveyed think parents should be allowed.Firstly,welcoming parents to their Moments will promote understanding and strengthen mutual communication.Besides,teenagers are easily misled by the complicated society.If they give their parents a place in their online world,they can be protected.

However,60% of the participants think otherwise.First and foremost,everyone needs some privacy and has their own secrets and lifestyles.Moreover,the generation gap is always a big problem.A lot of misunderstandings may arise if parents are enabled to see the posts.

Anyway,in my opinion,I believe blocking our parents in Moments is not a bad idea,as no social media can replace face-to-face communication.

【解析】這是一篇描述性并表明觀點的提綱類作文。文章內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)給出。同學們在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：1. 通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。2. 要點要齊全。但是不要對要點進行簡單的羅列。可以使用適當?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。3. 注意分類與總結(jié)。全文應(yīng)包含兩種不同的觀點，要注意分類書寫，明確簡潔，且對比明顯。同時也要總結(jié)自身觀點，結(jié)合實際給出理由。

【范文亮點】

文章條理結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。開篇結(jié)合實際，提出問題，同時引出下文不同觀點，具有吸引力。二三四段分別寫了兩種不同觀點及理由和自己的看法，明確簡潔。

采用了主語從句（Nowadays,it seems that the Moments section of Wechat has become a popular part of the social networking platform.）和動名詞作主語（Firstly,welcoming parents to their Moments will promote understanding and strengthen mutual communication.）等高級句式。

采用了According to ，F(xiàn)irstly，Besides,However,First and foremost,Moreover,Anyway,In my opinion等多種連接詞，形式多樣，使句子靈活串起。