Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（共25分）。

假設(shè)你是李華。你的朋友Tom打算來(lái)重慶游玩，來(lái)之前想讓你先給他寫(xiě)封信介紹一下重慶。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示給他寫(xiě)一封信。

1．地理位置：中國(guó)西南部

2．占地面積：八萬(wàn)多平方公里

3．人口：三千多萬(wàn)

4．著名景點(diǎn)：大足石刻（the Dazu Rock Carvings）,長(zhǎng)江三峽（the Three Gorges）等。

5．重慶是現(xiàn)代化大都市。。。。。

注意：1，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。  2，詞數(shù)100左右

Dear Tom,

I’m delighted to hear that you are going to visit Chongqing.__________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I’m delighted to hear that you are going to visit Chongqing.Chongqing, where the Yangtze River and Jialing River meet, is situated in the southwest of China. Covering an area of over 80,000 square kilometers, it has a population of more than thirty million. Besides, there are many world famous places of interest, such as the Dazu Rock Carvings, the Three Gorges, which attract millions of tourists from all over the world. Nowadays, Chongqing, which is developing with high speed, is the biggest international city in China in terms of area and population. People here are very kind, warm and friendly to every visitor from any corner of the world. I believe you will enjoy your visit in Chongqing.

I hope to meet you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。同時(shí)也屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，向你的朋友Tom寫(xiě)封信介紹一下重慶。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述時(shí)可以以要點(diǎn)時(shí)為順序，也可以適當(dāng)加工要點(diǎn)，但運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文里面的where the Yangtze River and Jialing River meet, is situated in the southwest of China. 和Covering an area of over 80,000 square kilometers, it has a population of more than thirty million.都不失為好句子。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)短文寫(xiě)作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。