Question

【題目】假如你是某英文報(bào)的小記者,近幾年，某些旅行社組織中學(xué)生在寒暑假期間赴著名大學(xué)旅游，人們對此褒貶不一。針對這一現(xiàn)象,請寫一篇短文。

注意：1.要點(diǎn)如下：

(1)介紹問題； (2)人們對此不同的看法；(3)表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。

2.字?jǐn)?shù)：不少于100。

3.參考詞匯：旅行社 travel agency 校園 campus

In recent years, various tourism agencies

Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, various tourism agencies organize high school students to visit campuses of famous universities around the country during their summer and winter holidays. People’s opinions vary a lot over this issue.

On the one hand, many people, including some students, hold the opinion that university tours provide them with precious opportunities to see and experience university life. And this experience might inspire them to work harder to fulfill their dreams.

On the other hand, some other people think that it is no use just walking around a university. This kind of understanding is only skin-deep and it can be nothing but a waste of money and time.

In my opinion, since tourism will inevitably affect the normal life of the university students who stay on campus to study during the holidays, such tours make little sense to me.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇針對現(xiàn)象所進(jìn)行的議論文寫作。針對旅行社在寒假期間組織中學(xué)生到著名大學(xué)旅行的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行討論分析。要首先說明問題，再分別介紹不同的看法，以及說明自己的觀點(diǎn)。因此觀點(diǎn)要全面，力求客觀公正。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。【亮點(diǎn)說明】第二自然段第一句On the one hand, many people, including some students, hold the opinion that university tours provide them with precious opportunities to see and experience university life.使用that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，直接說明支持一方的觀點(diǎn)；第三自然段第一句話On the other hand, some other people think that it is no use just walking around a university.使用that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，進(jìn)一步呈現(xiàn)反方的觀點(diǎn)。最后一自然段In my opinion, since tourism will inevitably affect the normal life of the university students who stay on campus to study during the holidays,使用who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，說明我自己的觀點(diǎn)。使用了hold the opinion，it is no use doing sth，provide sb with…，it can be nothing but…，make little sense to sb等句型和短語，使得文章更加生動，表達(dá)更加準(zhǔn)確到位。分別使用On the one hand,On the other hand, In my opinion,來呈現(xiàn)支持方、反對方以及自己的觀點(diǎn)，使得文章層次分明，調(diào)理清晰。