Question

美國(guó)朋友Jane 在中國(guó)過(guò)了兩年， 即將回國(guó)。 假定你是李華，現(xiàn)在由你給她寫(xiě)封信，邀請(qǐng)她星期六晚上來(lái)你家參加晚會(huì)。要點(diǎn)如下：
祝賀她順利通過(guò)考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，大家都為她感到高興。
感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。
非常懷念那些野餐、郊游、聚會(huì)和一起度過(guò)的好時(shí)光。
注意：詞數(shù)100左右，信的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。郊游：outgoing 聚會(huì)(n.)：get-together
Dear Jane,
Your letter reached me yesterday ____________________________________  
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Yours
Li Hua 

Answer 1

Dear Jane,
Your letter reached me yesterday. I’m very glad you are doing so well in your studies. Congratulations on your passing all the exams.
How do you enjoy your years in China? You have really made such rapid progress that it often sounds that you were a Chinese girl. We are proud of you. And we all appreciate your help with our English. We will always remember the picnics, outgoings, get-togethers and the wonderful time we spent together.
What a pity you have to go back so soon. We’re going to have a party at my place this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00?We’ll have dinner together.
Yours
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本文是一封電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)她參加歡送會(huì)。文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來(lái)，考生發(fā)揮的余地較小，只需要翻譯成英語(yǔ)即可，寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要把所有的要點(diǎn)都包括在內(nèi)，不要遺漏。同時(shí)注意使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，倒裝句等不同的句式，讓文章充滿變化，不要那么的死板。同時(shí)要使用高級(jí)的詞匯和詞組提高文章的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如do well in，congratulations on，make rapid progress，be proud of，What a pity，go back；并注意了句子的銜接如and，such … that …等等。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫(xiě)作