Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫李華，你的英國朋友CROWN 寫信說他打算學(xué)習(xí)漢語，讓你幫他推薦一本漢語詞典，請你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信。

1. 推薦《現(xiàn)代漢語學(xué)習(xí)詞典》，商務(wù)印書館出版（定價(jià)68元）

2.推薦理由：外觀設(shè)計(jì)精美; 大字號，方便查閱：詞例豐富實(shí)用，適合初級學(xué)習(xí)者

3.希望對方滿意。

寫作要求：1.詞數(shù)100字。2. 開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

參考詞匯：商務(wù)印書館 The Commercial Press 《現(xiàn)代漢語學(xué)習(xí)詞典》Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary 詞例，詞條 entry

Dear Crown,

I’m so glad to learn that you are going to study Chinese

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Crown,

I’m so glad to learn that you are going to study Chinese. First of all, I will recommend you the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary, which is published by The Commercial Press. Because it is intended for Chinese learning beginners and it will suit you fine. Its beautiful design in big letters makes it convenient for you to look up the words. More importantly, the entries are abundant and practical. Last but not the least, it is cheap at a price of 68 RMB. I hope the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary will meet your need and be of great help to you.

Best wishes!

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于書信寫作，根據(jù)提示信息和要求來寫作。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 仔細(xì)閱讀題目中提供的有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2. 要依據(jù)提示信息，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。寫信件時(shí)要注意有條理地表達(dá)。3. 根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言整體應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)情況有一般將來時(shí)。4. 注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，首先介紹了推薦書籍，然后說明了推薦理由，最后希望對方滿意。文章還而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，比如First of all，More importantly，Last but not the least等插入語，使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，語言流暢。另外，句式多樣化，在Because it is intended for Chinese learning beginners and it will suit you fine. Its beautiful design in big letters makes it convenient for you to look up the words.和Iit is cheap at a price of 68 RMB.中用it做形式主語防止整句頭重腳輕； First of all, I will recommend you the Contemporary Chinese Learning Dictionary, which is published by The Commercial Press.是定語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語intended for，look up，meet your need，be of great help等，使文章行文更加流暢。這篇書信條理清晰，感情真摯。