Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last Monday, my classmate and I saw some people gathering in our way to school. In order to see what was happening, so we got close enough and found an old woman lie on the ground. The people around her just stand there, watching and chatting. We were worried about her and decided to take her to the hospital immediate. It turned out that she lost her balance but fell. She had to stay in hospital, so we called her family. Soon his son came and thanked us by offering us money. We refused money and left. Hurried to school, we found we were late. To out delight though, our teacher praised us for that we had done and we felt very proud.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in → on

【2】去掉so

【3】lie → lying

【4】stand → stood

【5】immediate →immediately

【6】but→ and

【7】his→ her

【8】money 前面加the/his

【9】Hurried→Hurrying

【10】that → what

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述的是我和同學(xué)一起去學(xué)校的路上，碰到一個老人躺在路上，而圍觀的人只是觀望著討論著沒有上前幫助老人。我和同學(xué)擔(dān)心這位老人，把老人送去了醫(yī)院并通知了其家人。家人非常感謝，以錢酬謝，我們拒絕了好意。老師表揚了我們盡管我們遲到了。

【1】 in → on考察介詞。on one’s way to sp.固定搭配，意思是在某人去某地的路上。故把in改成on。

【2】去掉so考察連詞。In order to不能和so連用。相當(dāng)于because和so不能連用一樣。故去掉so。

【3】lie → lying考察非謂語動詞。find sb. dong sth.固定搭配表示發(fā)現(xiàn)某人正在做某事。故把lie改成lying。

【4】stand → stood考察時態(tài)。文本所講述的事情發(fā)生在last Monday，所以動詞用過去時。故把stand改成stood。

【5】immediate →immediately考察副詞。immediately修飾動詞take。故把immediate改成immediately。

【6】but→ and考察連詞。fell和lost her balance屬于并列關(guān)系，不存在轉(zhuǎn)折。故把but改成and。

【7】his→ her考察物主代詞。我們幫助的人是個old woman。所以她的兒子應(yīng)該表示成her son。故把his改成her。

【8】money 前面加the/his考察定冠詞或物主代詞。money是名詞前面應(yīng)該加定冠詞the，或者加his，表示是她兒子的錢。故在money前面加the/his。

【9】Hurried→Hurrying考察非謂語動詞。hurry 和我們之間是主動關(guān)系。故把hurried改成hurrying。

【10】that → what考察疑問詞。what we had done表示我們做過的事。故把that改成what。